MY LAST WORD
one minute before
one minute before
my end
i heard the sound
of bullet
I can see the speed
of bullet
and the man with
the gun
I can feel the
sharp bullet
entering my
hard chest
I can see the
dark colour
of blood sprinkling
out of my heart
I can hear the
hurrying sound
running beside me
here and there
I can see and
feel the pain
of my own
people
I can make out the
changes in the place
but my life had
come to an end
I can see it,
my lord
calling me
towards him
I can hear my
own last
word to this world
"HAI RAM"
i heard the sound
of bullet
I can see the speed
of bullet
and the man with
the gun
I can feel the
sharp bullet
entering my
hard chest
I can see the
dark colour
of blood sprinkling
out of my heart
I can hear the
hurrying sound
running beside me
here and there
I can see and
feel the pain
of my own
people
I can make out the
changes in the place
but my life had
come to an end
I can see it,
my lord
calling me
towards him
I can hear my
own last
word to this world
"HAI RAM"
some problem will retype my comment
ReplyDeleteShailesh starts his blogging experince with a beautifuuly written poem avbout the end of a great era..gandhian era..I must congratulate you for the post ..(that instatly gives you a place in my blogroll)..although i belive words dont matter much if the theme is all set..(whcic is perfect mind you :)i certainly want few words to be replaced by better ones..like sprinkling can pave way for the better -spurting ..so now that you are all geared up for blogging (poetry mainly :D) i dont h ink there is anything that pulls you back...who can say this is your first post..is it your first poem too?
ReplyDeletekeep bogging and then you will be all over place :D let us hope so..:)
@frozenwell
ReplyDeletethank u dude....
i will continue this.....and i m very happy to hear these words 4m u....
and one more thing, it s my 1st poem.....
too good bro... i m really impressed!!!! so i 'll be catching up with you in a week's time..
ReplyDeletetill then ALL THE BEST!!!..
dude poem is too good but since its ur first poem i think u should have wriitn about birth or something rather than END.. got it...
ReplyDeletethat's my opinion.../
anyways the poem is good,....
@varun
ReplyDeletethank u dude.....
@ varun
ReplyDeletei never thought about tat dude....
thank u 4 tat...
but i think, we want d mood to write, not tat it s birth or end....
it s my opinion.....
good poem dude..it's a bit on the dark side which i like..
ReplyDelete@krazy panda....
ReplyDeletethank u dude.......
Nice one, keep writing...
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